10 April 2006

Swinging at balls

At the batting cage,
I face a machine that throws
yellow balls to me.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Technically, these are senryuu.

Peter Sipes said...

Really?

I had no idea that there were specific breakdowns within this kind of poetry. Hmm. I guess I've learned something new.

Should you come back anonymous, what is the difference?

Not that I'm going to change it, as senryuu isn't as euphonious to my ears. But I might be able to pinch in the difference on my template. Or I could always go to wikipedia.